Our Holidays...

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WOO HOO!  I did the most awesomest bomb in the really deep bit, on one of the best holidays!  We went to Nelson.  It was awesome because of the two rivers.  Go Nelson!!!                 by Maya

"Jackie can you please stop splashing me?!"  In the holidays, I and my sister went to Vinegar Hill.  I went down a really fast water slide  and Jackie went boogie boarding.      by Sarah

"Oooohh, Don't push me off!!...   Aaahhh!!!"
In the holidays we went to Gisborne.  We were jumping off the Marina.  I  jumped off and slapped my back.  "Oouch that was sore!" When I got out my back was red.      by Liam

 "Bubba!... Let go of me!"... "Elijah Stowers, unhand your mother right now!!! My pleas went unheard as my youngest son wrapped his arms around me and attempted to wrench the water gun from my hands. 
by Ms Etuale

"Come on!... I want to go to the birthday!"  In the holidays, I went to Auckland to celebrate Solo's son's birthday.  His name is Solomona.  It was a Tongan style.  After that we had a swim.  It was deep.  That was fun.  It was a good birthday to me.                by Falefehi

I saw ugly and gross animals at Hamilton Zoo.  They swam and swished side to side and tree to tree.    by Kahurangi

"YUM!... The smell of joy... cake and ice-cream!"  Outside is the smell of a BBQ.  MMMMmmmmm.  Delicious!  Best cake I've ever tasted!     by Chelsea

"YAY!"  I went to Wet Pets so we went inside so we looked at the pets.  We saw birds and fish and puppies.     by Nele